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Tuesday, December 9th, 2008

Just an update on the Nanowrimo book I was working on during November.  I made it to 47,000 words, which isn’t too bad considering how crazy busy it was last month.  We spent the last Saturday Christmas shopping, and in between shopping I wrote on a little computer I bought about seven years ago–and it was old when I acquired it.

Long about the 9pm that night, the little computer died, taking my writing with it (it was so old it didn’t even have USB capabilities).  It wasn’t the 3k that I needed to reach 50k, but it was something, and I never recouped it over the next day.

But I’m happy with what I accomplished and will be finishing the book this month.  I won’t, however, be using a ten-year old computer that might go kaput on me at any minute.

Revision and the Internal Editor

Friday, November 21st, 2008

Hit 31k on the new book. I should be about halfway done, but it’s hard to tell. When I hit revision time, I think 25k will be about halfway. I habitually write a ton more than I really need. Darn exposition. I’m trying to learn how to dramatize more and tell less.

It’s feeling pretty good so far. I’m excited to go back through and revise it and add more structure to the story, but being able to make stuff up on the spot is really the way to go sometimes. The characters, especially the side characters, are so much more interesting when I create them as they’re needed. I’ve had to rewrite a few times, however, when I didn’t like the first side character I placed in a certain spot. The second time at it, the characters turned out really fun.

There are some interesting things I’ve had to do due to the fact that I had no outline to speak of when I began this book at the beginning of the month.

For example, I’ve cut a lot of stuff already when I notice that I’m straying from the preconceived story in my head.

I think being able to reign the story in a bit has come from the experience I had writing Nethermore, which was written mostly without an outline and wound up being a train wreck because I added every little deviation and tried to make each one make sense within the plot, which royally messed up character and pacing.

So, I have a little bit better idea now when I’m straying too far. The little deviations can be left and dealt with in revisions. The big deviations would muddy up the whole recipe and cause huge swathes of rewriting. Here’s to hoping I’ve learned my lesson on that and can move toward a more coherent first draft.

There a lot of days where I feel like what I’m writing is utter drivel, and I have to keep telling myself that I can fix things after the fact. A sculptor has to have material to sculpt from. Right now, I’m creating that material: the base, the underpainting, whatever you want to call it. Sculpting—revisions—will come later.

If I fixed everything as I went, it would be like painting a painting to completion in 1 inch by 1 inch squares, including all the nitpicky details and without having drawn the thing beforehand. It might be an interesting exercise but the fact remains that the painting’s still going to look weird when it’s done. (Which, again, is what happened with Nethermore.)

My friend Shawn asked me the other day if revision is something “pretty darn essential to being a writer.”

I’m afraid it’s pretty darn essential. Unless you’re .01% of the writing population. And it may not be so much rewriting everything, but a combination of rewriting and revising. But sentences are deleted, some are added or changed to create better clarity, scenes are added or deleted to make the story fill out better, etc.

Rewriting used to scare me to death! Until I started looking at novels as sculptures and saw in my writing group that all the published writers are not only good writers but also good REwriters.

In other news, I went to the midnight showing for Twilight with my wife and a group of family and friends. My review: it was a faithful adaptation of the book. Best part of the movie: insertion of music by Muse: Supermassive Black Hole. Best part of the night: seeing my wife get very excited to see the movie.

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Wednesday, November 19th, 2008

Last night after work I wound up at Costco with the intent of meeting my wife there.  We’ve been without a TV for two or three weeks now since my brother-in-law moved out of the basement.  We’re not big TV watchers, but we do have a Wii, and you kind of need a TV in order to get the video game fix.

I wound up waiting for about an hour, and even though it’s Costco, I can only do so much looking, and I’m wandering around wishing I could do some writing.

But wait!  They’ve got laptops here with usb drives and Notepad on them!  I picked the laptop with the most discreet location and a good view of the nearby employees.  I plugged in my thumb drive and wrote about 800 words in twenty minutes.

Not a bad output, considering.  I just wish I’d thought of it earlier.  Maybe I should start writing at Costco every night.

Return

Tuesday, November 18th, 2008

It’s time to start updating frequently again after a long absence.  Things have been crazy!  Since I last posted, I’ve gotten married, become a step-dad, moved to a new city, started a new job, and started my next novel.  Life has given me one crazy ride, and I’m still getting used to things.

Couple items of note.  In February, Shawn Boyles and I started a web comic, Rocket Road Trip, about the crazy adventures of a family of monster hunters.  We originally wanted this to be a cartoon.  (We had been writing cartoons at work for the previous year before this and wanted to create a property that was all our own.)  And the cartoons will be forthcoming…when time allows.

I’ve also had quite a year so far insomuch as my writing goes.  I finished Nethermore back in April or May.  It clocked in at 175,000 words and was a bigger train wreck than my first novel.  I actually didn’t even get to the end fo Nethermore.  It was just getting way too long.  I’d started the book at the wrong point, I’d added way too many characters, and I kept changing the characters’ motivations.

After consulting with the wise members of the writing group, I ended the novel with something along the lines of: "And then the vampires flew in from the west on the winds of unforeshadowed happenstance.  One by one, the main characters either died of surprise or were eaten by the vampires.  Then the vampires turned on each other until not one thing moved or breathed or spoke in the land.  In the end, all that is, and was, and ever will be succumbed to death and madness.  The End."

The advice of my writing group was to be finished with Nethermore and go back to it at another time.  I’d learned all I could from it, and it was time to start something new.

I began my next novel a few weeks later, and within days, I met the woman I would marry, and as many of you know, being engaged sucks up a lot of time.  I didn’t get much writing done, but I did gather notes and scenes for the next novel.  Last month, I outlined the entire thing and now have a stack of 3×5 cards waiting for me to sit down and write.

For Nanowrimo, I decided not to write that novel.  Several friends had suggested that I play to my strengths and write something short and quirky, with the idea of a younger audience in mind.

And so I’ve been hard at work on my middle grade novel, which–if I continue on at the same pace–I’ll finish this month or early next month, depending on how long it is.

I’m experimenting.  The new novel is a free write, and I have to sometimes reign myself in to stay focused on the story at hand, but I’m getting some of the most creative and fun scenes and characters that I’ve ever created.  I go back and massage out the glitches when this mad dash to finish the thing is over.

But in the meantime, I’m enjoying myself immensely.

Little Plastic Bag Things

Monday, June 18th, 2007

Well, I finally finished my project for work. Week before last I worked 80 hours, didn’t leave the house for six days, and animated like a madman to finish the scenes for the video game. And that still didn’t cut it, so I spent last week tying up everything and sending it off to work.

And now I can breathe a little easier.

Well, actually I can’t. I’m still suffering from cracked ribs or something from when I coughed myself silly. And there’s the lingering breathing problems that seem to be some kind of asthma. At least I’m not contagious.

Saturday Matthias’ father took us to a castle in the town of Bueckeburg. The Counts of the surrounding area have lived in this place for hundreds of years, and their family still lives there and owns some of the other castles and fortresses in the Schaumburg area. One of the interesting things about this castle/palace at Bueckeburg is the ball room. Evidently the church has occasionally rented this pink marble room for youth dances. Now if that wouldn’t be cool! I’m not much into dancing, but throwing a party in an old castle sounds like a grand idea.

Outside of the castle there was a small antique store. We asked them to pull out their maps, and they did. I have had a fascination with maps ever since before I even read Tolkien, but Lord of the Rings sealed my love for it. I’ve been drawing them since 6th grade when my reading teacher read parts of the Hobbit to us and gave us the assignment to create a map, write a story in that world, and draw pictures of the characters.

Isn’t that coolest assignment ever? I wish I could remember the name of that teacher, because she might very well be one of the most-influential teachers in helping me choose what I want to do with the rest of my life.

But anyway, back to the maps. I picked out five of these (reproductions, unfortunately) and wish that I could’ve bought them all. Most of the ones I did get are medieval drawings of cities I’ve already been to whether on this trip or when I was an exchange student here twelve years ago.

So, now with my employer project done, it’s time to do a little work for myself. I’ve already started back on Nethermore. I haven’t done as much writing as I’d have liked, but I’m back into it, and that’s what matters.

And now this week we’re going to Munich! I’ve been excited about going back to southern Germany for several months now. We may hit some of the more interesting towns on our way down, stopping in Nuremburg for the night and then moving on to Munich by Wednesday. I don’t know what’s planned for the rest of the trip. But maybe we’ll make it into Austria or Switzerland or maybe even Northern Italy.

One of the places I’m really excited about it going to again is Neuschwanstein. Everybody’s seen pictures of this castle. It’s the one on which Disney based the Disneyland castle. It’s so beautiful that it’s surreal.

So today I realized that I only had a backpack that was way too small for all my clothes for a week’s trip. I went into town to see what they had there, and went to the grocery store on the way back to pick up a few food items for the trip tomorrow. I must’ve looked lost as I was looking for Ziploc bags (although I’ve been to this grocery store many times before) because a lady came up to me and asked if she could help me.

How do I explain a Ziploc bag in another language when I don’t know the name for “little plastic bag thing”? So I told her, “I’m looking for a small plastic pocket sacks that one can put things in like gummy bears and stuff.” She was very nice and gestured for me to follow her back to the meat department where she pulled out two sacks with handles and put all my groceries in them. She thought I was tired of carrying what I was going to buy! I thanked her and later found the Ziploc bags in another part of the store. I wonder if I could have just said, “Ich suche Ziploc” and that would’ve been enough.

I found the coolest bag ever! I don’t know what’s wrong with me, but I’ve always had a fascination with backpacks and luggage and plastic containers to store things in. Maybe it’s OCD or something in my head that figures everything has to be organized. This works in theory, since my stuff looks like it’s always in random places. But I assure, it’s organized!

So anyway, this bag works as a duffle bag and a backpack. You can zip the arm straps handily away and stuff this thing as full of clothing or chocolate or whatever, throw it over your shoulder, and then travel to places like France, Vienna, and Orem and eat your chocolate there. And you have enough room for the spare clothes in case you get a little messy eating that chocolate! Ooh boy, I’m on one today. Let’s just leave it at: I like my bag.

Anyway, I’m standing in line at the cash register. By now I’m pretty good at being able to get around and ask questions (though I may not understand the answers), so I was asking some questions of the lady at the register. I’ve got an American accent like you can’t believe, and I probably structure my German sentences like Tagalog sentences. If I keep my mouth shut, nobody can tell I’m not from around here. The moment I open it, it’s like spray-painting my face bright green. After I started talking, the girl behind me in line visibly craned her head to get a good look at me. Or maybe she just thought I was attractive. I mean, she was cute, too. Maybe it wasn’t my accent at all. Maybe it was Chemistry. But alas, I will never find out.

The Ideal Plot: Turner & Hooch

Thursday, February 1st, 2007

Yesterday I was the victim of a pernicious trick. I went upstairs to correlate with another coworker, when my next-door coworkers decided to change the wallpaper on my computer monitors.

There, tiled across two monitors in all its glory, were twenty posters of Turner and Hooch. Pretty funny joke. And not in bad taste. At least it was Turner and Hooch and not something like

But then we got to talking. Turner and Hooch is the prototype plot for everything written in Hollywood.

I mean, let’s examine the plot.

Man meets dog. Man hates dog. Dog saves man’s life. Man loves dog.

Every popular actor in the Eighties did a movie like that. Even James Belushi did K-9.

“Didn’t Mel Gibson do one too?” asked one coworker.

Yeah, he did Lethal Weapon.

Cop meets new partner. Cop hates new partner. New partner saves cop’s life. Cop loves new partner.

Not to mention that Schwarzenegger starred in Kindergarten Cop and Last Action Hero. Same plots, just substitute the word “kid” for “man” or “dog.”

This is also the plot of most Hollywood love stories. Take While You Were Sleeping, for example.

Girl meets boy. Girl hates boy. Boy saves girls life (figuratively). Girl loves boy.

No wonder Hollywood has gone downhill lately. Why am I not applying these secrets to Nethermore? I’d better get started.

(Have you noticed that the progress bar is moving lately? I’m writing again!)

Back

Wednesday, November 29th, 2006

Well, that’s the longest break that I’ve taken from the blog. Didn’t help that I was in Idaho, which one of my friends has called “information purgatory.”

It seems lately as if the powers of earth and hell are combining against me to keep me from writing Nethermore. Last night when I went up to the college to write, all my favorite writing spots either had people sitting in them already or were being cleaned. After 45 minutes of walking around (yes, the building is that big) I finally gave up, went home, bundled up in a blanket (my roommates like the house cold) and did a little typing before bed.

Things are shaping up. The progress bar will soon show the changes and additions I’ve been making. Right now, the whole story is such a mess that I’m not exactly sure how many words I have. I should be approaching the half-way point on the book–depending on how much I have to cut on some of the characters.

As far as Nanowrimo is concerned, I’ve taken the progress bars down for that one. I didn’t do very well. Again, I blame my own excuses for that. If I had a word for every excuse I’ve used to keep myself from writing then . . . well, the book would be done.

Night of the Living Headache

Tuesday, November 14th, 2006

Back in May I posted about how it was interesting how the novel was shaping up. The first scene of each viewpoint established the character in his society. The second scene of each viewpoint established how the character’s personal conflict related to the main conflict. I wasn’t sure how this was working at the time, but now I can report on it.

It wasn’t working. As I’ve been trying to get back into the novel, I’ve been reading what I wrote back in May and the first part of June (can you believe that I wrote 80k words in about a month?) In each case, each character’s first scene is expendable because I infodumped for however-many-thousand words. The second scene was almost always a better introduction–and more exciting too.

What’s more frustrating with the book is realizing how much I’m going to have to rewrite because I kept losing focus of the characters’ goals. The plotlines for some of the characters began to get uninteresting as I accidentally meandered in some of the chapters, seeking for the character’s purpose in the story.

All in all, the book is a trainwreck right now. I went home last night with a headache and a determination. Even though I’m going to have to cut at least half of what I wrote in May, I’m still trucking ahead. There’s still a lot in this book that I like and is spurring me on to finish it.

Writing Again

Tuesday, November 7th, 2006

Two hours of work is only showing 212 words of actual writing on the Nanowrimo word meter. That seems pitiful, but this is my first day back to writing. I actually read through and edited a 4500 word short story called “Robes of the Gods.” Those 212 words count for the final scene of the story, which I wrote tonight.

Otherwise, I’ve been going through Nethermore notes in order refamiliarize myself with the story. Expect progress on that one in the next few days. I’m really getting excited for this book again.

Booksignings

Tuesday, October 17th, 2006

Occassionally I go with Brandon to booksignings in order to sign the Mistborn maps and just generally help out by cornering readers and asking them if they like fantasy books. I have a great time each time I go. I used to work in a book store, and I loved recommending books to people, so the signings both feed my desire to share cool books with people and also motivate me in my own writing. After all, someday I’d like to be signing Nethermore for people.

Brandon posted this picture to his blog yesterday, so I thought I’d pass it on by posting it here. This was the Mistborn booksigning in Idaho Falls, Idaho. Three television stations dropped by to interview us, and we just had a lot of fun in general, especially when people I knew from home dropped by to say hi and get their books signed.

I just have to say, Brandon’s a stellar guy to let me tag along at these things.